Writer’s Journal

Tempting Tanya

December 14, 2021

I loved what I’ve written so far, but when I read it, the story felt like something was missing. It lacked depth on Mike’s part. He felt two-dimensional. I also had some concerns about Tanya. She’s not behaving like a mature woman. I’m rethinking some parts of their personalities and past. I have deleted about fifteen thousand words. Some of it can be reused, but it needs to take place later in the book.

I definitely feel the attraction between them and I can’t wait until they have their first sexual encounter. She’s been crushing on him for years and he’s never been around anyone so blatantly sexy.

Back to work.